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As I am new here, what is a good practice for... I dunno... pedantry edits. I am terrible for those.
As I am new here, what is a good practice for... I dunno... pedantry edits. I am terrible for those.


For example, In this article, I am tempted to replace "produce the best type of resource or pleasure for everyone", with "produce the best type of resource or service for everyone"
For example, In this article, I am tempted to replace "produce the best type of resource or pleasure for everyone", with "produce the best type of resource or service for everyone" In the overview section, as that does not seem to be directly related to the other matters about pleasure mentioned elsewhere in the article.


Just throwing it out there...
Just throwing it out there...

Latest revision as of 09:02, 18 April 2022

As I am new here, what is a good practice for... I dunno... pedantry edits. I am terrible for those.

For example, In this article, I am tempted to replace "produce the best type of resource or pleasure for everyone", with "produce the best type of resource or service for everyone" In the overview section, as that does not seem to be directly related to the other matters about pleasure mentioned elsewhere in the article.

Just throwing it out there...